tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23819746.post3252895612899406273..comments2023-06-04T16:36:10.645+08:00Comments on Musings of an Aspiring Polymath: Many YearsThe Negative Manhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02963006548339423249noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23819746.post-9002944786061111092009-12-22T08:20:13.119+08:002009-12-22T08:20:13.119+08:00It's an abridged version. I took out an entire...It's an abridged version. I took out an entire chunk from the middle, which may have explained and connected things better.The Negative Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02963006548339423249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23819746.post-16065505285694704382009-12-22T02:18:59.404+08:002009-12-22T02:18:59.404+08:00it's funny that we don't seem to follow in...it's funny that we don't seem to follow intro, rising action, climax/problem, denouement story structure strictly anymore.<br /><br />but this one works. It's believable. The ending, u might want to tweak it a bit, on two counts -<br /><br />firstly, the charaters are not stricly seperated by time and distance<br /><br />secondly, the ending is a tad cliched. It's not a bad ending, but if comments are meant as reviews, these would be my opinion.Benedicthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12813193759108385792noreply@blogger.com